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31 Movie Reviews

I'm scared, what do I do?

Should I be worried that almost every single song but 1 were on my MP3 player, and the Tiny Tim ones were on my favorites folder.

I think my MP3 player is possessed, what do I do?

YES!

OK! Gotta admit something, It was not as good as the old one... I think the fact that I saw the old one already just made it weird for me, I dunno.

But I am SO GOD DAMN HAPPY that you kept "Where is my mind" in there with the Fight Club reference at the end... If you didnt, it would have just killed the entire flash.

So yes, Thank you for The Pixies song and other then that, I guess people that have seen the old one really just cant appreciate this one as much... sorry.

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Does every freaking animator on Newgrounds have to resort to pot humor? Its not funny, it kills the mood, its unoriginal and uncreative. It pretty much killed the entire flash for me.

Other then that it was ok, but like I said, it killed the entire flash, after that, it wasnt even funny.

Recent Game Reviews

9 Game Reviews

wow...

This game really sucks, and the drug references were just annoying...

Sure you may have worked on it for a long time and put alot of time putting in that actionscript... but it just sucks... I dont know what to say, I dont know how you could make it better... maybe taking out the drug references would be a start, because its not funny and it just takes away from the game, other then that... its just not fun.

Wiesi-Mausland responds:

if you dont think this game is fun, perhaps you should try taking some drugs

Great Job!

One problem tho, its 3D looking as far as turning and stuff. But walking into the bars is very fake looking, It needs to grow MUCH faster in size then it was, and shouldnt disappear in front of you but go around u.

Other then that, Great job.

joearchy responds:

the bars themselves were merely a movieclip the had 360 frames in it and showed them depending on what angle you viewed it at...

you stole that script...

the 3d cube script was stolen from another tutorial... ive seen it, same exact thing.

The car was slow and didnt accellerate smoothly...

all of it was very basic, you couldve spent alot more time on it. i spent over a week on mine... better luck next time.

Recent Audio Reviews

4 Audio Reviews

amazing.

I would love to see the .rns file for that. It must be amazing. You've got some great sound here. My only comment would be on the repetition, but then again, you mentioned its a bit trance, which would describe repetition.

Very impressive atmosphere. Great job.

durn responds:

Thanks a lot for the review.

And you're quite right. Repetition is my achilles heel. I used to be cursed with making 8-12 minute songs. It's taken me years to learn to compress my work. :p Still learning as you can see! lol. :)

instrumentah

I like the complexity it builds into. The problem I have however is the backing track is the same exact instrument as Voices.

I would recommend always changing the instruments you use, even if you use the same instrument, make sure your always changing the properties of it to make it more yours. Turn up the tone, distort it, add effects, etc. It can dramaticly improve your song just by the sound alone, plus if people want to listen to more than just 1 song from you, they wont say "every song sounds the same".

So yea. Great job on the track, I'm definitely downloading it.

Fight4nothing responds:

Thanks. Good Review. ill see what i can do.

You should keep making it

But for the background instrument, you should change the 4th note... it doesnt really match the feel of the original tetris in my opinion.

I think the 4th note should be higher.

Other then that, this was a good shot and I enjoyed it!

Never judge a man until you've walked a mile in his shoes. That way, when you DO judge him, your already a mile away. Plus you've got his shoes! :P

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